Rough Cut Feedback

Today Bex and I showed our rough cut to the class and here are a few things we noted down;

1. Detach audio from scenes added today!
2. Keep the eye-line match with Bex and the Pier - (don't interrupt with the letter writing.)
3. In the shots of Bex writing a letter, she hasn't written much - continuity?
4. Increase the opacity - ghost is too ghostly. (Someone in our class didn't see it! O.o)
5. Re-consider clothes of the ghost.
6. Hand or shadow rather than whole people/evil/sound music to make it scary.
7. Clever continuity/illusion.

Of course we are a way off completing our final title sequence, but after this we have decided to of course work on the areas that came up.

1. Detaching the audio was just something we forgot to do given the time of having to upload the shots before showing it to the class!
2. The point on eye-line match is a very good point and I totally agree with this, so of course this will be changed.
3. Where Bex hasn't written a lot is a fair point, so we will have a long think about re-filming as such a late date. 
4. Same with the ghost, it will take a while to find the perfect opacity, we just didn't have the time in one lesson today! 
5. Not sure why we would need to, but we will think about it. :)
6. I don't quite fully understand this point yet, the soundtrack we had playing was just a protocol, whilst Bex was working on mixing a few together and creating something perfect!
7. Well, this was our aim! ^_^